Talk:The Social Network/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Rusted AutoParts  20:05, 22 November 2020 (UTC)

I'll pick this one up. Allow me some time to analyze the page and see what needs to be improved. Rusted AutoParts 20:05, 22 November 2020 (UTC)


 * Lead/Infobox
 * Lead could use a paragraph about the production of the film, so as to encapsulate the article as a whole.
 * ✅ Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 23:44, 22 December 2020 (UTC)


 * A source for it screening at the New York FIlm Festival needed. Should also be noted in the Release section, as it had it's first screening at NYFF. Rusted AutoParts  23:11, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 23:44, 22 December 2020 (UTC)


 * Plot
 * Under 700 maximum to satisfy WP:FILMPLOT, good on this end.
 * ✅, plot is 549 words Chompy Ace 01:41, 14 December 2020 (UTC)


 * "Returning to his dorm, Zuckerberg writes an insulting entry about Albright on his LiveJournal blog" I think "entry" should be changed to "post".
 * ✅ Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 01:14, 14 December 2020 (UTC)


 * "In depositions, the Winklevoss twins claim that Zuckerberg stole their idea, while Saverin claims his shares of Facebook were unfairly diluted when the company was incorporated", perhaps a "separate" could be added between "In" and "depositions".
 * ✅ Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 01:14, 14 December 2020 (UTC)


 * Cast
 * Should probably source all the names in this section for consistency.
 * ✅ Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 02:13, 14 December 2020 (UTC)


 * Production
 * Casting: A) Rashida Jones should probably be mentioned in this section. She has a source in the Cast section so it can be used here too. B) "Casting began in mid-2009, with Jesse Eisenberg, Justin Timberlake and Andrew Garfield cast" -> "Casting began in mid-2009, with Jesse Eisenberg, Justin Timberlake and Andrew Garfield announced to star".
 * ✅ and ✅ Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 01:14, 14 December 2020 (UTC)


 * Marketing
 * Is there any other marketing details worth noting that you can find? Like a notable promotional campaign, something under those lines. If not, that's okay.
 * Couldn't find much information not already in the section. Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 23:44, 22 December 2020 (UTC)


 * Release
 * I think the Critical response section could use a few more reviews, to help highlight the critical response towards the noted "Fincher's direction, the performances (particularly that of Eisenberg), screenplay, editing and score".
 * ✅ A paragraph based on the claims has been added. Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 02:32, 19 December 2020 (UTC)


 * Accolades
 * All good.


 * Historical accuracy
 * All good.


 * Legacy
 * All good.


 * Possible sequel
 * Any updates on sequel news if any?
 * Added some additional information. Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 23:44, 22 December 2020 (UTC)


 * References
 * Reference 16 only one that isn't archived.
 * ✅ Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 01:14, 14 December 2020 (UTC)

Submitting my first few notes. Will add some more upon closer look. Rusted AutoParts 00:12, 14 December 2020 (UTC)
 * Added what I think are my final notes. Rusted AutoParts  23:08, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
 * Done. Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 23:45, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ Rusted AutoParts  23:56, 22 December 2020 (UTC)