Talk:The Sontaran Stratagem/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Khazar2 (talk · contribs) 20:54, 5 November 2013 (UTC)

Hi Gabriel, I'll be glad to take this review. Sorry you've had to wait so long for one. I hope to post comments on this in the next day or two... Mrs. Khazar and I have just reached this point in the series, so once we've watched it, I'll be reviewing. Thanks in advance for your work on it, Khazar2 (talk) 20:54, 5 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Thank YOU! There is no problem to me to wait someone like you who certainly will do a great review. Gabriel Yuji (talk) 13:55, 7 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Thanks, that's very kind! More soon -- Khazar2 (talk) 15:16, 7 November 2013 (UTC)

Okay, thanks for waiting that extra bit. Mrs. Khazar gives both episodes 5 out of 5 stars, and I'm ready to do this review. On first pass, I only have a few minor concerns that I couldn't immediately fix. Overall, this looks strong; thanks again for your work on it. And let me know your thoughts on two minor points:


 * "joined a long line of mothers that don't get the Doctor" -- the source of this quotation should be clarified in-text--is this a statement by Doctor Who Confidential? Or someone they interview? I don't know how this show is usually structured.
 * "many stated Raynor improved from her previous episodes." -- "many" may be an exaggeration here--only one critic is explicitly identified as saying her writing improved. -- Khazar2 (talk) 20:47, 8 November 2013 (UTC)


 * I changed the word "many" for "some", and I specified that the sentence was said by Tennant. It was in DWC; you can see on 39:35 here. Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:34, 9 November 2013 (UTC)