Talk:The Space Museum/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 04:18, 9 January 2022 (UTC)

Lead and infobox

 * In the first paragraph, the first three sentences repeat the word "serial", and while this article is about that, would there be a way to avoid this so the prose is not as repetitive? For instance, the serial was broadcast on BBC1 could be change to.
 * I would link incidental music for this part, used stock music recordings for the incidental score.
 * Since VHS and DVD is linked in the article, I would link them in the lead to be consistent.
 * Add ALT text for the infobox image.

Plot

 * Everything looks good with this section.

Production

 * Serial should be linked in the part, asked to develop a four-party serial of his story, as it is the first time the word is mentioned in the article and it should be linked to be consistent with the linking in the lead.
 * This is more of a clarification question, but do we have any examples of the humor that was edited out of the original script?
 * I would link incidental music in this section as well. It may be helpful for readers who are unfamiliar with the concept.
 * Is there a reason why lobotomy is put in quotation marks?
 * Link The Crusade in the "Filming" sub-section.

Reception

 * The image should have ALT text.
 * Has there been any scholarly analysis of this serial?

Commercial releases

 * Please add ALT text for the infobox image.