Talk:The Splendid Source/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 03:42, 8 November 2010 (UTC)

I'm going to review this, since it's been at GAN forever. It'll be a few days before I get to it though, have a very large article to finish reviewing. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:42, 8 November 2010 (UTC)

Here are the issues I found:
 * Patrick Meighan links to a dab page; fix so it goes to the right guy.
 * Done. Gage (talk) 05:25, 12 November 2010 (UTC)
 * "Main cast member, and formerly a series writer, Mike Henry," reads a bit iffy. Suggest "Main cast member and former series writer.." also, is he still a main cast member? I presume so, as i would think he voiced more than just Cleveland. If not then put former at the start.
 * Done. And yes, he is still listed in the credits as a main cast member. Gage (talk) 05:25, 12 November 2010 (UTC)
 * "film series," comma unneeded.
 * Done. Gage (talk) 05:25, 12 November 2010 (UTC)
 * "the only show with any sense of mystery." cite needed for quote
 * Done. Gage (talk) 05:25, 12 November 2010 (UTC)

Just a couple issues. Article will be on hold for 5 days, when fixed I'll pass it. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:53, 12 November 2010 (UTC)
 * Looks good now, so the article passes. Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 05:33, 12 November 2010 (UTC)