Talk:The Stolen Invention/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 21:27, 6 June 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, I'll take another. I just can't help myself JAG  UAR   21:27, 6 June 2015 (UTC)

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Checking against the GA criteria

 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * I would recommend splitting the lead into two paragraphs to make the lead more balanced, per WP:LEAD
 * Nothing on the Production in the lead, despite the section being scarce the lead must summarise, even if it's minor
 * The plot summary in the lead is quite extensive
 * "The girl's sweetheart, Tom, is a lawyer" - sweetheart? "Lover" would sound more formal
 * "Reception for this film was mixed, but not praised highly in the three main trade publications" - how about "viewed negatively"
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

I can't put this on hold, the points are too minor and thus this meets the GA criteria. It would benefit from a copyedit though JAG  UAR   14:24, 8 June 2015 (UTC)