Talk:The Stony Brook School

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This school is not mormon. It is Christian. However, being a Christian is not a requirement to attend. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 38.117.247.14 (talk) 20:42, 31 August 2009 (UTC)

Neutral Point of View
This article currently looks like an advertisement for the Stony Brook School instead of neutral coverage of the school. Please justify your reason for getting rid of the "Recent Controversies" section. RisingStar (talk) 12:18, 10 April 2013 (UTC)

The article looks no more like an advertisement for this school than the other school page articles, such as Philips Exeter or any other prep school. The purpose is to give a sense of the history and culture of the institution to the many alumni and people who have crossed its path. The "Recent Controversies" section cited as its source a website that is factually unreliable and claims as its source a one-sided account of a small number of people with exaggerated and personally motivated ambitions which do not represent the feeling of the institution or the overwhelming majority of the alumni and faculty. Davidhickey (talk) 14:50, 10 April 2013 (UTC)


 * One of the purposes of this article is "to give a sense of the history and culture of the institution to the many alumni and people who have crossed its path". However, another purpose of this article should be to give an unbiased overview of the school to the potential applicants, potential students, and their parents. It may be true that "Restore the Brook" is an unreliable source, but it is true that the Board of Trustees attempted to change the Platform of Principles to disallow the majority of the world's Christians from serving the school, and it is true that many people, not just the people who maintain the website, opposed the proposed change. (How else do you explain the fact that an unusually high number of faculty resigned after the 2009-2010 school year? You probably know more about this than I do, but their resignations seem to have been caused at least partially by this controversy.) Parents of potential students would appreciate reading about this controversy; alumni who had not known about this controversy would appreciate reading about it. If the school released a statement about the proposed change, I would have considered using the statement as the source, but my search returned no such results. You are welcome to change the wording of the "Recent Controversy" section, but I believe that a proposed change to something as significant as the Platform of Principles, one of the foundations of the school, deserves a mention in the "History" section, especially since its effect would have been considerable.
 * Also, I believe that the potential applicants and potential students have the right to know that not all listed AP courses are offered every year and that students are required to go to chapel four to five times per week. Without the additional information that you deleted, some people will be misled into thinking that all AP courses are offered every year or that chapel attendance is optional. RisingStar (talk) 21:44, 10 April 2013 (UTC)
 * Since you have not posted any replies after 3 days, I will assume that you agree with me and will revert your edits. RisingStar (talk) 12:55, 13 April 2013 (UTC)

Promotionalism
One of the principles of WP in WP:NOT is that WP may not be used for promotionalism. A list of colleges that accept the graduates of the school is generally regarded as promotionalism, pure and simple, and not acceptable. What other purpose has it? The general guideline is that a Wikipedia article  needs to be written like an encyclopedia article, not a press release and include only material that would be of interest to a general reader coming across the mention of the subject and wanting the sort of information that would be found in an encyclopedia. Do not include material that would be of interest only to those associated with the subject, or to prospective students or supporters --that sort of content is considered promotional. Please do not restore it.

I noticed the above discussion. There's another even more important principle here, WP:V, as explained by WP:RS. All controversial material must be justified by reliable sources, which in this context means 3rd party independent published sources, print or online, but not blogs or press releases, or material posted on the internet, or material from the school, or an alumni or student or faculty group. I do not see such sources for the material on the controversy. The school's principles as posted by the school is a RS for such uncontroversial material as what the principles are at any given time, but drawing inferences from them is WP:Original Research, and we do not do that here.

I suppose I should also remind people about WP:COI. People with a conflict of interest should post requests for changes on this talk page, not make the edits themselves unless they are utterly uncontroversial.  DGG ( talk ) 17:20, 9 May 2013 (UTC)

Assessment November 2013
Giving a C class assessment, though could easily reach B with a bit of work. Requires references on information likely to be challenged, e.g. "In the past two decades, new and upgraded facilities which have included three new residence halls, a stadium, an all-weather track, and a baseball field, as well six major renovations all totalling over $10,000,000, have raised the caliber of academics, athletics, and community life - the capstone of which will be the completion of a new dining hall and student center." and the Leadership Program. Prose is preferable over bullet points on Wikipedia (WP:MOS). Rename the 'Facts' section to 'Overview' and turn the bullets into prose. As always, refer to WikiProject Schools/Article guidelines for tips to improve the article further. Hope that proves helpful. Good luck! Duffit5 (talk) 18:09, 28 November 2013 (UTC)

General Edits
Under "Athletics," winter track is said to be a sport for credit, which is untrue. I am now a college freshman (four-year alumna of SBS) working on this article for a class project. Winter track is the grouping together of fall cross country and spring track runners/athletes who want to continue training during the off-season.

Under "Campus Facilities," John Rogers Hegeman Memorial Chapel (The Chapel) is said to be "the center of prayer and worship during the week and on Sunday mornings." With the changed schedule for the 2016-2017 year, Chapel is no longer held in The Chapel but now in Carson auditorium or Swanson Gymnasium. Kcataudella (talk) 18:33, 12 September 2016 (UTC)

In the "History" section, the fourth citation includes a link to a page that is no longer found. This is in reference to Dr. Gaebelein's quote about the purpose of the school. ("The Stony Brook School Head of School Profile". Carter Baldwin Executive Search. Retrieved 2013-02-02.)

Also in the "History" section, the Middle States Association of Colleges and School's website does not include any information about the Stony Brook School, though the wiki article claims that it does. ("The Stony Brook School Profile". Middle States Association of Colleges and Schools Commissions on Elementary and Secondary Schools. Retrieved 2012-12-25.) The Cum Laude Society's webpage is also no longer found. ( "Cum Laude Society Chapters" (PDF). The Cum Laude Society. Retrieved 2012-12-25.)

The citation for "SBS Facts" should be updated, for the citation reads that the info. came from 2014-2015 when the wiki page and Stony Brook School website both say that the information was taken from the 2015-16 year. (SBS Facts (2014-2015 School Year)". The Stony Brook School. Retrieved 2015-03-10.)

Alum Aaron Belz's profile is no longer cited to a useful source, for the page for Mr. Belz's information cannot be found. ("Aaron Belz staff profile". The Begger Blade. Retrieved 2012-12-25.) The same goes for James Boice ("James Boice Biography". Tenth Presbyterian Church. Retrieved 2012-12-25.) and Lars Brownworth (Lars Brownworth article).

Kcataudella (talk) 02:02, 13 September 2016 (UTC)

General Edits
Information to be added or removed: Change section title under Notable People from "Former Faculty" to "Faculty" and after Lars Brownworth paste "(1999-2007, 2019-present)" Explanation of issue: The changed section title will include current faculty of note and update specific personnel (see link to directory). References supporting change: https://www.sbs.org/about/contacts-and-directory?deptId=24721

Information to be added or removed: in the infobox under athletic conference please update from NYSPHSAA to Private Schools Athletic Association Explanation of issue: Stony Brook is no longer in NYSPHSAA conference. (see links to membership) References supporting change: http://www.psaany.org/html/schools.html; https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Private_Schools_Athletic_Association

Information to be added or removed: Add this sentence after the first sentence under Athletics: "From 1974-2018, Stony Brook was a member of Section XI of the New York State Public High School Athletic Association. In 2018, the school joined the Private Schools Athletic Association." Explanation of issue: This updates the shift in athletics conference referenced in the change above. (see links to membership) References supporting change: http://www.psaany.org/html/schools.html; https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Private_Schools_Athletic_Association

Information to be added or removed: replace the amended sentence under athletics "Approved activities include Strength and Conditioning in the fall and winter, interscholastic Chess, interscholastic Robotics, and the Theater Arts Society, all of which are offered in winter.' Explanation of issue: Updating extracurricular athletics with the Strength and Conditioning program. (see link to team page) References supporting change: https://www.sbs.org/Team-Detail?fromId=240454&Team=180973&SeasonLabel=2020%20-%202021&siteId=1035

Information to be added or removed: Under "Senior Masters," edit the following "Michael G. Hickey (1986-2019)" "Martha L. Pavao (1994-2020" "Erik Johnson (2020-present)" Explanation of issue: This updates current personnel. Michael Hickey and Martha Pavao no longer are employees. See source to publication with Martha Pavao for the 2019-2020 year. References supporting change: https://media.almabaseapp.com/702/alumsite/magazine-issues/the-bulletin/b04526db46d74f24b079cb8a240709e7.pdf

Information to be added or removed: in the infobox, update school website to "sbs.org" Explanation of issue: the official url address has changed References supporting change: https://www.sbs.org

DHickey 21:55, 19 August 2020 (UTC)

General Edits
Information to be added or removed: under the history section add the following, "In 2020, Stony Brook launched Gravitas: A Global Extension of The Stony Brook School offering live online classes, character formation lessons, chapel, and advisory to students around the world.

Information to be added or removed: under "Senior Masters" add "Erol Altug (2001-present)"

DHickey (talk) 18:56, 8 August 2022 (UTC)


 * I have declined the above edit requests because a source was not provided to verify the information. If you would still like this information to be added to the article, please open a request and include where an editor can look to ensure the information that is added to the article is supported by a source. If you have any questions please go to the WP:HELPDESK or WP:TEAHOUSE. Thanks, and happy editing. Z1720 (talk) 05:04, 22 August 2022 (UTC)

Gravitas: A Global Extension of the Stony Brook School
A major development that should be accounted for in this article is the formation of Gravitas: The Global Extension of the Stony Brook School. Thlaylix (talk) 02:11, 7 March 2023 (UTC)


 * About Gravitas | Online College Prep Middle & High School (sbs.org) Thlaylix (talk) 02:36, 7 March 2023 (UTC)