Talk:The Stranger (Ingrid Andress song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:51, 2 August 2022 (UTC)

I will get on with this review today! --K. Peake 07:51, 2 August 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * The lengths are not sourced anywhere in the body
 * See under track listing. Sebbirrrr (talk) 17:18, 2 August 2022 (UTC)
 * Andress → Ingrid Andress in the infobox producers parameter, as this is not a track listing
 * Could you explain this a bit more? From what I've seen, there are song articles who use the full name if the producer is also a songwriter, and some who only use the surname if said producer is also a songwriter. Sebbirrrr (talk) 17:18, 2 August 2022 (UTC)
 * Add a comma after debut studio album
 * "The track was written by" → "The song was written by" to be consistent
 * "was handled by Andress and" → "was handled by it and"
 * I said "the former" as it would sound a bit weird to refer to Andress as "it". Sebbirrrr (talk) 17:18, 2 August 2022 (UTC)
 * "on February 4, 2017 for" → "on February 4, 2017, for"
 * "from Lady Like in" → "from the album in"
 * "a lost romance. Andress was inspired to write the track" → "a lost romance and Andress was inspired to write it"
 * "the song's theme as well as" → "the song's theme, as well as"
 * Wikilink as music videos
 * "in February 2017 via CMT" → "in February 2017, via CMT,"
 * "the same day as Andress' debut album." → "the same day as Lady Like."

Background and release

 * Merge with the below section, retitling to Background and composition
 * "She returned to" → "Andress returned to"
 * "Kara DioGuardi who was" → "Kara DioGuardi, who was"
 * Move the release info to the reception section, which I will instruct more further on
 * "in May 2020 announcing that the song will" → "in May 2020, announcing that the song would"
 * Mention what nation the country radio stations are in
 * "as the next single" → "as a new single"
 * Mention when the deluxe was released

Composition and lyrics

 * Make this the second para of the above section
 * "and produced it with" → "and handled the production with"
 * "It discusses a" → "The song discusses a"
 * "elaborating that "most songs" → "elaborating: "Most songs" since this is a full sentence
 * "never an in-between"." → "never an in-between."" per MOS:QUOTE on full sentences
 * "romanticized movies" and that" → "romanticized movies" and"
 * CMT should not be italicised
 * "piano-driven exposé"." → "piano-driven expose"."
 * "the lyric "You" → "the line "You"

Reception

 * Retitle to Release and reception, with the release info making up the first para
 * "received positive reviews from" → "was met with positive reviews from"
 * "Caramanica and deemed it" → "Caramanica deemed it"
 * "of the track and that it" → "of the track and it"
 * "ABC News Radio called it" → "The staff of ABC News Radio called the song"
 * "for Sounds Like Nashville deemed" → "for Sounds Like Nashville, deemed"
 * "at number 49 and at number 54" → "at numbers 49 and 54"

Promotion

 * Wikilink music video
 * "February 22, 2017 via CMT." → "February 22, 2017, via CMT."
 * "on March 27, 2020 coinciding" → "on March 27, 2020, coinciding"
 * The location is only sourced as a house, not a mansion
 * CMT should not be italicised
 * "and that she wished she would have" → "wishing in retrospect she would have"
 * "and was hoping that" → "and was hoping"
 * Shouldn't the performances be identified as in February and May 2020, respectively?
 * Wikilink Country Radio Seminar per MOS:LINK2SECT

Track listing

 * Shouldn't this section be added to source the separate lengths?
 * I added it because the reimagined version also has a different length. However, the 2020 version of the song wasn't released as a separate single for digital download so I instead mentioned it in the background and composition section. Sebbirrrr (talk) 17:18, 2 August 2022 (UTC)

Personnel

 * Good

Release history

 * Label → Label(s)

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; this should be relatively easy since it's a short review! --K. Peake 08:53, 2 August 2022 (UTC)
 * thanks again for reviewing! I addressed everything and left some comments. Sebbirrrr (talk) 17:18, 2 August 2022 (UTC)
 * Nice response, though her full name still needs to be used under producers per Template:Infobox song; this is not a track listing and any articles still using surnames only either do it because that's how it's credited or they're outdated. --K. Peake 07:43, 3 August 2022 (UTC)
 * Got it! Added her full name now. Let me know if there's something else I need to add. Sebbirrrr (talk) 12:05, 3 August 2022 (UTC)
 * Great; all that you need to do now is change debut album to Lady Like in the second para and add a comma after February 22, 2017, in the music video section. --K. Peake 12:27, 3 August 2022 (UTC)
 * Done! Sebbirrrr (talk) 12:37, 3 August 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, congrats on getting this done in just one day! --K. Peake 13:46, 3 August 2022 (UTC)