Talk:The Sweetest Apu/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer:  R uby2010   comment!  15:56, 6 June 2011 (UTC)

I will review soon.  R uby2010  comment!  15:56, 6 June 2011 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Comments

 * "It is up to Marge, Homer and Apu try to keep his wife Manjula from learning his secret." Word missing
 * Add character wikilinks in plot section
 * Identify how John Swartzwelder and Matthew Nastuk related to series (producers? staff writers? etc)
 * "On August 24, 2010, "The Sweetest Apu" was released as part of The Simpsons: The Complete Thirteenth Season DVD and Blu-ray set. Al Jean, Ian Maxtone-Graham, Matt Selman, Tim Long, Dan Castellaneta, James Lipton and Matt Warburton participated in the audio commentary of the episode." Needs ref
 * Make sure you use two sets of quotations marks in quoting critics (example: "he said 'Sweetest' was good")
 * Provide wikilinks for DVD Verdict and DVD Talk.
 * A screenshot would really jazz up the article, but it is not required for this review to pass
 * The lead needs ratings data summary

Just make the needed changes above, and the article will be good to go. This review is now on hold for seven days. Thanks,  R uby2010   comment!  16:16, 6 June 2011 (UTC)
 * A screenshot should not be added to decorate the article. See #1 and #8 of the Non-free content criteria. Theleftorium (talk) 16:42, 6 June 2011 (UTC)
 * I think I have fixed everything now. I've also added an image that I think fits the article. Thanks for the review! Queenieacoustic (talk) 16:56, 6 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Looks great. The image has a good rationale and its use seems justified for this article. Pass for GA. Nice work!  R uby2010   comment!  18:45, 6 June 2011 (UTC)