Talk:The Sword of Shannara/GA1

GA Review
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This article is very good in its current state however there are still a few problems with the article.


 * The background/development section needs to go before the plot summary.
 * Reduce the plot and remove any unnecessary information about the story. This should be a plot summary.
 * Use the proper license tag to go with the fair use rational for each image.

When these issues are resolved feel free to contact me on my talk page. If you feel that this review was in error feel free to take the article to WP:GA/R. Thanks. Tarret  ''talk 14:52, 6 July 2008 (UTC)


 * As recommended above, I've moved the Background section before the plot summary. --DanDs (talk) 17:37, 6 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Which license is the correct one? The non-free rationale's are enough, right? So just remove the book covefr lisecnes? ?  the_ed 17  01:26, 11 July 2008 (UTC)


 * I've added the license tag Template:Non-free 2D art to these images used in the article:
 * Image:Allanon and Flick.jpg
 * Image:Leah.jpg
 * Image:Kern (Shannara).jpg
 * --DanDs (talk) 05:27, 11 July 2008 (UTC)

OK thats improved a bit now the only thing that needs to be done is the plot intro should be merged with the plot summary as background information to the plot. This should make the article a bit closer to WP:FICTION as it should be more built around the development and reception of the story instead of the plot. It should be fine after that. Tarret  ''talk 13:32, 11 July 2008 (UTC)


 * I'll do that now. Thank you, DanDs!  the_ed 17  20:31, 11 July 2008 (UTC)