Talk:The Tale of Mr. Jeremy Fisher/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kaguya-chan (talk) 14:51, 26 July 2010 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * Lead is on the short side; Also "....pays homage to the lifestyle of the upper class British gentleman of leisure" is a little confusing. Did you mean something like "....pays homage to the leisurely lifestyle of the upper class British gentleman"?
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * Would like a source for Adaptions
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * Character section is very short and would probably work better being removed and cited in the caption.
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * File:Jeremy Fisher Deluxe Binding 1906.jpg seems odd since there is already a cover picture
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:


 * Expanded lead, and adjusted sentence about "British gentleman". Provided source for adaptation. Deleted character section and incorporated info into image caption. Deleted image of deluxe binding. Susanne2009NYC (talk) 19:55, 26 July 2010 (UTC)
 * Thank you for all your hard work. It fulfills the GA criteria. Kaguya-chan (talk) 22:07, 26 July 2010 (UTC)