Talk:The Telltale Head/GA1

GA Review
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There are quite a few problems with the article, nothing which can't be fixed though. Here's the things that need fixing:


 * Try and expand the lead a little. Maybe add something about the reception.✅
 * Merge the Production and First appearances sections.✅
 * Merge Reception and Legacy.✅
 * There's no need to reference the plot. Per WP:MOSTV: "Plot summaries do not normally require citations; the television show itself is the source, as the accuracy of the plot description can be verified by watching the episode in question."
 * Image:SideshowBobsfirstappearance.png I don't see how this image qualifies for fair-use here.✅
 * What makes "rec.arts.tv" reliable?✅ Removed information also, as it would be unreferenced.
 * Un-wikilink "beheaded" in the infobox caption.✅
 * "and originally" >> and it originally✅
 * "three children Bart admires" name the children (if they're named in the episode, or other episodes).✅
 * "$5.00" >> "US$5"✅
 * "On his way in" >> "On his way to the movie"✅
 * " I thought" take away the space between " and "I"✅
 * "despicable deed" This may just be me, but this sounds very sketchy. Try replacing "despicable" with a word like horrific or atrocious.✅
 * "'one who done this,'" Use speech marks to quote not apostrophes and to think about it, there's no need to really quote that anyway.✅
 * "(who also feels more than a little responsible for this incident)" remove "also" and change the brackets to commas.✅
 * "into the statue" >> "onto the statue"✅
 * "episode is flashbacks" >> "episode in flashbacks"✅
 * Maybe 4 or 5 words to describe who Jack Woltz is.✅
 * "This episode is the first for the characters" >> "This is the first episode of the series in which [the list of characters] appear."✅
 * Warren Martyn and Adrian Wood, said they enjoyed: "the Simpsons [being] grossly dysfunctional in church, Homer dispensing terrible advice, and a real moral dilemma for Bart."✅
 * "adds" >> "added that"✅
 * Add a full-stop/period after "to come"✅
 * "15.2 and a 26 percent audience share" explain what this means.✅Removed info. See above.
 * remove ", as "Professor Chaos""✅
 * "Second" >> "The second reference was in the episode"✅

I'm putting the article on hold, meaning that you have a week to fix these problems. I'll promote if they're fixed by then. Leave a message on my talk page when an editor fixes the problems. -- [User] Jamie JCA [Talk] 00:42, 25 August 2008 (UTC)