Talk:The Tower of Druaga/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Abryn (talk · contribs) 15:12, 25 August 2019 (UTC)

Starting review. - Bryn (talk) (contributions) 15:12, 25 August 2019 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:


 * The Gameplay section says that each floor will have different enemies, does this mean that all 60 floors have an enemy that is unique to them?
 * Some floors will introduce new enemy types, but not for every one of them. Rewrote to make it more clear. Namcokid47 (talk) 20:56, 25 August 2019 (UTC)
 * From what I understand, Nintendo Life is only reliable for certain writers, and the reviewer Marcel van Duyn is a user of its website and not a member of its editorial staff.
 * Removed. Namcokid47 (talk) 20:56, 25 August 2019 (UTC)
 * The Dragon Quest source doesn't seem to identify that Nakamura's appreciation for Endou was because of Druaga. Do you have any supplementary information to demonstrate its relevance to this article?
 * I thought I saw something where he said it was because of Druaga, but I can't find it anymore. The source also doesn't confirm it, so I removed it. Namcokid47 (talk) 20:56, 25 August 2019 (UTC)

Passing the article. Nice job! - Bryn (talk) (contributions) 21:01, 25 August 2019 (UTC)

Oh, except one of the images lacks a fair use rationale, which is an easy fix. - Bryn (talk) (contributions) 21:02, 25 August 2019 (UTC)