Talk:The Uninvited (1944 film)/GA1

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 00:44, 25 April 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:44, 25 April 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Can the caption be "Theatrical release poster"?
 * Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)


 * Add alt text to the image (WP:ALT).
 * Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)


 * Washington, DC Washington, D.C. (consistency)
 * Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)


 * Remove the comma after Lewis Allen.
 * Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a comma after Ruth Hussey.
 * Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a comma after Harrison's Reports.
 * Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a comma after Charlie Parker.
 * Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

Plot and cast

 * Plot is under 700 words - passes WP:FILMPLOT.
 * Right on. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)


 * "grand-daughter" "granddaughter"
 * Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)


 * Dr Scott Dr. Scott (consistency)
 * Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a serial comma after "Rick, Pam" (both uses).
 * Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)


 * "The group realize" "The group realizes"
 * Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)


 * Cast section looks good.
 * Right on. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

Production

 * Here and in other sections, combine citations from the same source.
 * Done. I continued having citations where there was a quote though. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:54, 27 April 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a serial comma after "A Matter of Life and Death (1946)".
 * Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:54, 27 April 2021 (UTC)


 * "in September 29, 1942" "on September 29, 1942"
 * Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:54, 27 April 2021 (UTC)


 * "October 20th" "October 20" (MOS:BADDATE)
 * Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:54, 27 April 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a comma after "a copy of The Uninvited".
 * Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:54, 27 April 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a serial comma after "Allen, Partos".
 * Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:54, 27 April 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a comma after "in fact".
 * Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:54, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

Release

 * "for the The" "for The" (both uses to avoid repetition).
 * Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:57, 27 April 2021 (UTC)


 * Other than that, this section looks good.
 * Sweet! Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:57, 27 April 2021 (UTC)


 * Combine citations from the same source.
 * Did this for some here. There's a few that I don't feel should be combined as they combine information from separate sources. But I've believe I've done what you asked. Andrzejbanas (talk) 11:18, 28 April 2021 (UTC)

Reception

 * Lower the usage of quotes with WP:RECEPTION.

Legacy

 * Try shortening the caption as it feels too long.
 * Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 17:02, 27 April 2021 (UTC)


 * Also add alt text (WP:ALT).
 * Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 17:02, 27 April 2021 (UTC)