Talk:The View from Halfway Down/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:03, 1 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 23:03, 1 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good.
 * Don't link dinner party, talent show, or swimming pool per WP:OVERLINK.
 * ✅  Kncny11  (shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)

Plot

 * Without the names in parathesis, this section is 414 words. MOS:TVPLOT says that episode-articles should be at max 400 words so try removing some.
 * ✅ 376 words now, minus the parenthetical acting credits  Kncny11  (shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Also, some links here and in other sections lead to disambiguation pages, so try fixing those links.
 * ✅  Kncny11  (shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)

Production

 * You can't cite WP:IMDB, even if you disguise it as the Internet Movie Database.
 * ✅ My bad. Some 30 Rock GAs use that format (e.g. "Emanuelle Goes to Dinosaur Land"). Replaced with a podcast interview with Tafel and an online newspaper interview with Winfrey.  Kncny11  (shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
 * "Kazzaz'" "Kazzaz's"
 * ✅  Kncny11  (shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Remove the comma after "within the show".
 * ✅  Kncny11  (shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
 * "with series finale" "with the series finale"
 * ✅  Kncny11  (shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
 * "V." "V".
 * ✅  Kncny11  (shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
 * The line containing "suicide by jumping" should probably link to "Later", the episode in which the event took place.
 * ✅  Kncny11  (shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
 * "[i]t felt" "it felt"
 * ✅  Kncny11  (shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)

Reception

 * "an A writing, stating" "an "A", stating"
 * ✅  Kncny11  (shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Link IndieWire.
 * ✅  Kncny11  (shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
 * The first sentence says the episode received praise from "many reviewers", but only two are listed that actually talked about the episode. Try adding more.
 * ✅ Rewrote/regrouped the entire section after digging up more articles  Kncny11  (shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
 * The last sentence has a source from Gold Derby, a website that isn't that reliable. Can a more reliable source be swapped in?
 * ✅ Replaced with an IndieWire citation saying that "Free Churro" was the first nomination in that category for BoJack  Kncny11  (shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)