Talk:The Vinyl Conflict/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Adabow (talk · contribs) 08:49, 17 April 2011 (UTC)

Nice article, not too many issues:


 * One dablink to fix
 * FIxed Crowz  RSA  16:17, 17 April 2011 (UTC)


 * One dead EL to fix
 * FIxed Crowz  RSA  16:17, 17 April 2011 (UTC)


 * Link remastered
 * Done Crowz  RSA  16:17, 17 April 2011 (UTC)


 * "did not chart on any charts" is a bit tacky
 * Removed Crowz  RSA  16:17, 17 April 2011 (UTC)


 * "It includes all ten of Slayer's studio albums since 1986" - did they release albums before 1986? If not, remove "since 1986".
 * They released two studio albums before 1986. Crowz  RSA  16:17, 17 April 2011 (UTC)


 * "it was announced that band would be releasing a second box set" - mention first box set here
 * Done Crowz  RSA  16:17, 17 April 2011 (UTC)


 * "it originally had a suggested price tag of $199.99" - in lead it says it was released at that price. Was it the original price, or suggested price?
 * FIxed Crowz  RSA  16:17, 17 April 2011 (UTC)


 * Link US dollar at the first mention, rather than in a quote in Reception
 * Done Crowz  RSA  16:17, 17 April 2011 (UTC)


 * "It is the first time that Slayer's nine studio albums" - so is it nine or ten studio albums?
 * FIxed Crowz  RSA  16:17, 17 April 2011 (UTC)


 * Allmusic references should be styled using Allmusic
 * Done Crowz  RSA  16:17, 17 April 2011 (UTC)

Issues have been addressed, passing now. Adabow (talk · contribs) 20:15, 17 April 2011 (UTC)