Talk:The War on Kids

March 2010
Just to let you know, we're working on formatting and referencing this page through the weekend. My friend, who wrote this entry, is new to Wikipedia, and I've been guiding him along.
 * Fair enough, One thing to look at- the language in the Film Content section is very emotive in places. Statements like "rampant" and "capriciously punished" describe a point of view and the reader doesn't really get an idea of how good or bad things are.  These should be swapped for more encylcopedia style language (Its like using the word 'best' - its only meaninful when compared to other things). Clovis Sangrail (talk) 05:21, 18 March 2010 (UTC)

Article neutrality
Much of the article synopsis appears to be lacking in neutrality and objectivity. Instead of merely describing events or quoting from the film itself, it is largely written in a commentary style. Needs to be reworked. Bumm13 (talk) 21:09, 14 October 2012 (UTC)


 * I was going to mention the same thing. The reception section desperately needs more than one negative reaction, especially given that the film in question is entirely one-sided.
 * &#9875; nbmatt 07:38, 25 November 2012 (UTC)


 * Yea, this is sad to see on Wikipedia 178.174.237.99 (talk) 21:53, 6 February 2015 (UTC)