Talk:The Witch Way/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Arsenikk (talk)  14:21, 1 November 2010 (UTC)

Fix ref 17 and the article will pass (I fixed the rest). Arsenikk (talk)  14:21, 1 November 2010 (UTC)
 * Comments:
 * The logo is inappropriate use of a fair use logo. However, because it only consists of text, it is not eligible for copyright and I have moved it to the Commons. Since it is no longer a fair use image, it can be used freely (within the permits of a trademark).
 * There are so many Manchesters and Nelsons that the country has to be specified. For a moment I wondered if the route was in British Columbia, Canada.
 * Boldface X43, X44 and Timesaver.
 * Don't repeat links from the lead to the body.
 * The award section is too short for a stand-alone section, so I move it to the history section. Award section for a single award are also broderline POV issues.
 * Avoid single-sentence paragraphs, such as in variants.
 * Ref 21 was dead, but I found the new url.
 * Ref 17 needs to be formatted with a publisher or author, a date and/or an accessdate.
 * Done. Thanks for sorting the other problems. Alzarian16 (talk) 14:35, 1 November 2010 (UTC)