Talk:The Woo/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 00:21, 31 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 00:21, 31 March 2021 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

 * Infobox is in great shape!
 * "a number of" "several" (less wordy)
 * "out Roddy Ricch" "out to Roddy Ricch"
 * "Roddy Ricch never was able catch up with Pop Smoke when he was alive. They would say hello sometimes while passing each other" does not sound Wikipedia-ish.
 * Removed


 * Add references at the end of each sentence containing a quote per WP:QUOTE.
 * Remove the comma after "from Pop Smoke".
 * "commented the" "commented that the"
 * Add a serial comma after "Pop Smoke, 50 Cent".
 * "labelled" "labeled" (American English)
 * "inspiration creating" "inspiration for creating"
 * "also features" "also feature" (American English)
 * Archive sources (either manually or with this tool).
 * The reference after "abilities" is missing a "|last5=" parameter.
 * Mark references from Los Angeles Times with "|url-access=limited".
 * Mark references from Rolling Stone with "|url-access=limited".
 * Mark references from Vulture with "|url-access=limited".
 * Some Dude From North Carolina thanks so much for the review. I have addressed all of your concerns. The Ultimate Boss (talk) 08:38, 1 April 2021 (UTC)
 * A recite is needed after "global superstardom" and there are Rolling Stone and Vulture references that need "|url-access=limited". After addressing these issues, ping me, and I'll pass the article.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 23:25, 1 April 2021 (UTC)
 * Some Dude From North Carolina Done. The Ultimate Boss (talk) 06:19, 5 April 2021 (UTC)