Talk:The X Factor (Australian TV series) season 3/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Lemonade51 (talk · contribs) 12:16, 22 February 2012 (UTC)


 * General
 * There is one dablink which needs fixing. ✅
 * One dead link too. ✅


 * Lead
 * "Following bootcamp, was..." remove comma. ✅
 * Just something for you to think about – Why is Melanie C referred to as her full first name but Mel B is shortened? Double check if it's 'Mel B' not 'Melanie B' on the X Factor website.
 * On the show, she is known as Mel B. Oz   talk  22:01, 22 February 2012 (UTC)
 * Should Over-25s be hyphenated? Again unless the official site does so, I see no reason why it should be there.
 * Per WP:XFACTOR. Oz   talk  22:01, 22 February 2012 (UTC)
 * "The season sparked controversy, including Mel B's attitude...", replace including with 'namely'. ✅


 * Judges
 * "...judge Kyle Sandilands announced on his breakfast radio show, Kyle & Jackie O, that..." remove comma between Jackie O and 'that'. ✅
 * "Others who were also rumoured...", you used the word rumoured before, how about using a different word ✅


 * Auditions
 * "14 years-old", years-old does not need to be hyphenated. If it was fourteen-year-old, then yes. Likewise with "16 years old". See here for clarification. ✅


 * Home Visits
 * "Sebastian and his Under 25 Boys...", Under-25 even?
 * Sorry what? I'm confused lol. Oz   talk  22:25, 22 February 2012 (UTC)
 * You forgot to hyphenate between Under and 25! – Lemonade51 (talk) 22:37, 22 February 2012 (UTC) ✅


 * Ratings
 * "All six of the season's audition episodes ranked first on their respective nights and peaked the highest on 30 August", replace '30 August' with the following night. – Lemonade51 (talk) 19:56, 24 February 2012 (UTC) ✅