Talk:The Yaqui Girl

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I just finished reviewing your article. The other reviewer put in a lot of great feedback in the actual sandbox which I definitely agree on. There are a lot of ways in which you can expand this article, whether it be creating a character list, different sections for setting, cast, plot, etc. Using the templates at the top of the sandbox (same place you were able to design your reflist), you'll be able to also make titles. Be sure to separate Titles for Cast, Introduction/summary, etc. to create a more academic feel for your article. Spend some time looking at other wikipedia articles on similar topics and see how they set up describing the film and its origins. Grammatically, the article is in good shape. Good luck on the remainder of the project! Tarynbrier (talk) 00:02, 3 December 2014 (UTC)

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