Talk:The Young Victoria/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Aranea Mortem (talk • contribs • count ) 15:55, 9 September 2011 (UTC)

I'll take this up, it's looking pretty good, and I'll probably pass it with some improvs.


 * Could you remove the "of the United Kingdom" from Queen Victoria (first sentence)? It seems a little superfluous.
 * Done  R uby   comment!  16:13, 9 September 2011 (UTC)


 * BAFTA Award for Best Costume Design and BAFTA Award for Best Makeup and Hair need links on the last sentence of the lede.
 * Done  R uby   comment!  16:13, 9 September 2011 (UTC)


 * "Victoria moves into the just-completed Buckingham Palace" Victoria moves into a recently constructed/completed Buckingham Palace?
 * Done  R uby   comment!  16:13, 9 September 2011 (UTC)


 * "They also supported arts and sciences which was celebrated" I could be wrong, but is isn't it "that were celebrated"?
 * Done  R uby   comment!  16:13, 9 September 2011 (UTC)


 * "an historian" A his...
 * Done  R uby   comment!  16:13, 9 September 2011 (UTC)


 * "The producer later remembered, "She..." Lower case the s.
 * Done  R uby   comment!  16:13, 9 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Put a Track listing on the Music section, with the lengths of the tracks and such.
 * Expand out the accolades from your article List of accolades received by The Young Victoria, just a couple more awards need be mentioned.
 * The Home media section needs a bit of expansion, are there not any sources to be found to improve it?
 * You should probs remove the Films about and TV about section from See also.
 * There are 2 dablinks need fixing: AMC and The Blind Side. Aranea Mortem (talk to me) 16:12, 9 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review! I'll keep working on the others.  R uby   comment!  16:13, 9 September 2011 (UTC)
 * All of the rest of your great suggestions have now been implemented. Thanks again for the review! Kind regards,  R uby   comment!  18:29, 9 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Okay, good work, all passed! Aranea Mortem (talk to me) 13:44, 10 September 2011 (UTC)