Talk:Thelnetham Windmill

COI Statement
Although I was involved in the restoration of the mill, I do not believe that there is any Conflict of Interest issue here. I took part in two of the work-ins, in separate years. My small contribution should not be seen as affecting my ability to write the article, all of which is from published sources. Mjroots (talk)

Restoration team
For interest, the restoration team involved in the restoration of Thelnetham windmill was:-


 * Individuals


 * Mark Barnard, Peter Dolman, Charles Dolman, David Pearce and Chris Seago (owners).


 * Andy Abbott, Sharon Abbott, Peter Adderhead, Claude Aldridge, Paul Annetts, Chris Armour, David Atkins, Sandra Atkins, Nigel Bacon, Chris Baker, Bill Bickham, Hervey Benham, Stephen Binns, Gordon Baker, Jack Barnard, Chris Bell, Diane Bell, Andrew Barnett, Tony Brandon, Pat Brookes, Russell Brown, Phillipa Bryan, Michael Bryant, Sheila Bynser, Eric Burrows, Paul Clark, Alan Clarke, Des Clover, Des Codd, Gavin Codd, Viv Codd, Adrian Colman, Laurie Corbett, Paul Curtis, Brian Davey, Kay Davidson, Fred Davis, Arthur Dolman, Freddie Dolman, Richard Duke, the Duke of Grafton, Ian Elliott, Michelle Ellis, Ken Farries, Martin Field, Sylvia Foreman, Wilf Foreman, George Garrod, Michael Garrod, Jonathan Goode, Bill Griffiths, Karen Hamilton, Piers Hanmore,Trevor Harris, Martin Harrison, Tony Hart, Daniel Haskin, Andrew Haylett, Rick Hesketh, John Holdaway, Annemiche Hoogenboom, John Hoogenboom, Mark Howard, Peter Humphries, John Infield, Chris Hullcoop, Stephen Kay, Robert Kemp, Delphine Laws-Lovett, Colin Lammin, Phillip Lennard, David Lewis, Elain Lewis, Alan Lloyd, Alan Loseby, Paul Lovelock, Cliff Lovett, Paul Lucas, Caroline Mackley,  Helen Marks, Neville Martin, Adam Milne, Peter Moran, David Newman, Nigel Moon, David Newnham,  Joscelyne Nurse, Trevor Nurse, Mike Organ, Vincent Pargeter, Catherine Parker, Don Paterson, Liz Pearce, Karen Prestelle, Mr Petrovich, Martin Pickering, Don Porter, Philip Ridout, Jo Roberts, Neville Rogers, Michael Roots, Ron Round, Kevin Rutterford, Richard Seago, Bob Sharp, Michelle Skinner, Rob Shorland-Ball, Richard Slaughter, Basil Smith, Roland Smith, John Snowdon, John Spencer, Benjamin Stopford, Elizabeth Stopford, Vicky Stopford, Janet Swain, Richard Tyler, Bob Tyrell, Alan Wallis, Ralph Ward, Liam Warren, James Waterfield, Kim West, Helen Whitfield, Chris Wilson, Michael Wolf, Karl Wolf, Linda Wooston, Bernard Wouters, Jane Wymer.


 * Organisations


 * Adnams Ltd, Anglia Television, Arco Group, Association of Independent Museums, Barrow & Hepburn Ltd, BBC East, Belstead House, Ipswich; Belzona Molecular Metalife Ltd, Blo' Norton Women's Institute, Blue Circle Industries, British Telecom, Bury Free Press, Chapman & Smith Ltd, Chester's Sawmill, Needham Market; Colchester Endeavour Group, Crane Fluid Systems, Cranfield Bros, Ipswich; Cross Keys PH, Redgrave; Diss Express, East Anglian Daily Times, Eastern Daily Press, Eastern Electricity, Eastern Plant Service, Stanton; Emhart, Engineering Training Board, Ipswich; English Training Board, Ipswich; English Heritage, Euston Estate, GKN, Hervey Benham Charitable Trust, Historic Buildings Council, Ipswich Electrical, Ipswich Historical Transport Society, Ipswich Scout Association Ipswich Society, Rank Xerox Ltd, Fosroc Timber Treatments, Friends of Norfolk Windmills, Jameson Marshall Ltd, Jewson Ltd, Ipswich; T & A J Mann Ltd, Earls Colne; Mid Anglia Crane Hire, Mill Inn, Market Weston, Museum of East Anglian Life, Stowmarket; National Association for Gifted Children, Norman Scarfe Trust, North East Essex Machinery Club, Pascalls Ltd, Wix; Protim Ltd, Radio Orwell, Ransomes, Sims & Jefferies, Record Tools, S L Contractors Ltd, Market Weston; South Norfolk News, Stanton Middle School, Suffolk College of Further Education, Ipswich; Suffolk County Council, Suffolk Mills Group, Suffolk Preservation Corps, Suffolk Preservation Society, Thelnetham Parish Council, White Horse PH, Thelnetham.

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Comments by Mjroots

 * Lead - lead length is consistent with MoS for length of article (2 or 3 paras).
 * Links - all relevant terms are wikilinked.
 * Images - one free image and one fair use image are used. It may be possible to add further images if they can be located.
 * Numbers - how does one add a non-breaking space when using a convert template?
 * Spelling - meter appears to be part of "diameter" which is spelled correctly throughout. -isation in in the article, -ization appears in the text a bottom which is from the Wikimedia Floundation. There is a difference between a curb (track on which the mill's cap rotates) and a kerb (edge of pavement at side of road). These are two separate words with two separate meanings. Programm(me) - British spelling of programme is used throughout.
 * Copyediting - this has been asked for.

Mjroots (talk) 20:29, 26 July 2009 (UTC)