Talk:Theodor Weissenberger/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 04:39, 31 December 2014 (UTC)

A couple of suggestions for A-Class by Peacemaker67 (crack... thump) 09:58, 3 January 2015 (UTC)
 * notes for the rank equivalents
 * place a bit more focus on the number of "ace-in-a-day" events. Perhaps by putting them in a table or by noting using ordinals which one each was ie "This was the fifth occasion on which he achieved "ace-in-a-day" status." or similar.
 * suggest dropping (1st Group) etc when you established the first translation of Gruppe. ie no need to repeat for 1st Group, 3rd Group.
 * suggest a table with his victories.