Talk:There Goes My Baby (Usher song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: -- CallMe Nathan  &bull;  Talk2Me   04:22, 22 November 2010 (UTC)

Lead

 * The song was later -> repetitive, try "it"
 * Done.


 * While reaching a peak of twenty-five on the Billboard Hot 100, the song topped the Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs -> doesn't read like a complete sentence. Should consider merging.
 * Done


 * favored the clip -> its not a clip, its a complete video
 * Done. Candy  o32

Composition

 * was warmly received -> the song or his use of his falsetto range?
 * Falsetto range. I think the current wording world imply that as the falsetto range mentioning comes after the song.

Chart performance

 * solely from digital downloads as a promo single -> awkward
 * Done


 * since the inception of the chart -> what year is that?
 * The year is not given in the source. It only says "inception."


 * a feat not matched since his Confessions era -> a feat no one matched? or just him?
 * By him, changed.

Music video

 * screenshot -> too risque to include in the article :P lol
 * Confused at what you are getting at lol.


 * while he stands in a field and the sun rises in the background -> an the sun should be re-worded
 * Done.

Live performances

 * You write "performed" like 6 times. I know its tricky, but try and mix it up.
 * Done. Candy  o32  20:36, 28 November 2010 (UTC)


 * Good work, very few mistakes :)-- CallMe Nathan  &bull;  Talk2Me   17:40, 25 November 2010 (UTC)


 * Looks good. I'm passing.-- CallMe Nathan  &bull;  Talk2Me   20:54, 28 November 2010 (UTC)