Talk:There is a green hill far away

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I just thought of a possible minor improvement for the hook; but since the discussion over there is closed, posting here: at the very beginning, change  to  ; hymn is already given in the quote so mildly redundant/needlessly verbose. Cheers, RandomCanadian (talk / contribs) 23:44, 20 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Good idea, thanks. Yoninah (talk) 23:48, 20 June 2020 (UTC)