Talk:Therion (band)/GA1

GA Review
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This article is decent but needs some work to reach good article status. Issues include:


 * Too much information is unreferenced, including:
 * "Secret of the Runes (2001—2004)" section
 * Most of "Lemuria & Sirius B (2004—2006)" section
 * "Gothic Kabbalah (2006—2007)" section
 * "Symbols" section
 * A lot of the information uses the biography from the band's official website, which is a primary source. Secondary sources should be used.
 * Resolve the [citation needed] template
 * Image:Bells of Doom.jpg should not be in this article; it only belongs in the album article
 * Image:Therion beyond.jpg needs its image license improved for this article
 * ProgPower Festival leads to a disambiguation page
 * There are two dead links in the references
 * References in non-English languages—such as Swedish—need to be marked as such
 * Prose needs to be cleaned up
 * "However, band's name is also taken as homage" — "However, the band's name is a homage"
 * what is "audience successful"? in any case, needs a dash in between
 * "highly influenced" – shouldn't just "influenced" be enough?
 * The above prose issues come from the article's lead. I suggest copyediting the rest of the article.

Please keep this page updated on the article's progress. Thanks! Gary King ( talk ) 03:56, 3 December 2008 (UTC)


 * Issues have not been resolved, therefore this article has failed its good article nomination. Gary King  ( talk ) 18:06, 10 December 2008 (UTC)