Talk:Thief II/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TheQ Editor (talk · contribs) 20:17, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

I am a Good Article reviewer recruitee and this is the first article I reviewed. I know the Good Article criteria though. But I am sorry if I had gotten something wrong in the review. For example, I saw a lot of [ ] with text in the middle, and that was one of the things I think it should be fixed. But maybe it's supposed to be there, just explain it to me and I'll change it in the review. If you have any problems, or if you fixed all the areas I pointed out, please leave a message on my talk page.Regards  TheQ Editor     (Talk) 20:55, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

Specific problems with "Well Written"

 * Would be better if there's a See Also section
 * Done.


 * Word "prophesized" misspelled. No "z"
 * Done.


 * Word "moreso". Not a word
 * Done.


 * Word "Mages" not supposed to be proper.
 * The word appears in a quote. I can't change it. I could add a [sic], if you like.


 * Phrase "the The New York Times" looks weird. Perhaps putting The New York Times in quotations?
 * That was actually a typo. Fixed.


 * Word "sequel-itis". I don't understand.
 * As with the other one, this appears inside a quote. I can't change it. "Sequel-itis" (more commonly rendered "sequelitis") is an informal term used to describe the loss of freshness, innovation and inspiration in a video game sequel.


 * The article has lots of [text] such as [and], accept[ing],  [their],  [us],  [we], [... and], [...]  and [were]
 * Yes, it does. It's used to cut down quotes to a manageable size. As far as I know, it doesn't violate any MOS guidelines. I've never seen any objections to it at FAC.


 * Fix wikilink disambugiation page of Ken Levine. Please specify which one.
 * Done.
 * Thanks for the review. See my comments above. JimmyBlackwing (talk) 21:50, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Please add the caption to the infobox image. You can do this by adding |caption = under the image.   TheQ Editor     (Talk) 22:10, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Done. JimmyBlackwing (talk) 22:18, 23 April 2014 (UTC)