Talk:Thing-Fish/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 17:59, 5 May 2012 (UTC)

I'll review this article. The very first thing is that the bare URLs need to be fixed and turned into citations. Do that while I look through the article over the next couple days. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 17:59, 5 May 2012 (UTC)

I just noticed the main writer was a sockpuppet, so the review's not going to be responded to. Nonetheless, here's some comments:
 * As noted above, the bare URLs have to be fixed.
 * "Harry presented a homosexual boy, Rhonda" as a
 * The prose as a whole isn't too bad, but it does get quote-heavy at times.
 * The reception section doesn't note much why it wasn't liked originally.
 * The Google books sources need page numbers, and if they aren't free view then they shouldn't be linked.

The article's not too bad; if an independent non-sockpuppet goes through the article it could become a GA without too much effort. Until then, the article fails. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 16:13, 6 May 2012 (UTC)