Talk:Thinkin Bout You (Frank Ocean song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 02:39, 23 June 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Infobox

 * Information is needed in the article to verify that "quiet storm" is one of the genres of the song

You're right, I've removed it.

Lead

 * ...just out of his reach and the turmoil that brings... → Change "brings" to "ensues"

Done


 * ...video directed by visual art group High5Collective released on September 15... → Specify year this occurred

Done


 * Ocean performed Ocean performed the track during his seven show tour... → Get rid of the first "Ocean performed"

Copy editing error, done.

Background

 * At a listening part in 2012, it was confirmed that the track would appear on Ocean's Channel Orange.[6] → Change "part" to "party"

Composition

 * According to WP:SAMPLE, audio recordings have to be less than 10% of the original recording (it needs to be less than 20.1 seconds and is currently 25 seconds)

Reception

 * No issues

Promotion

 * No issues

Chart

 * Fix the table so that it is closed

Done?