Talk:Thinking 'Bout You (Dua Lipa song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 18:41, 10 April 2021 (UTC)

I will start this review tomorrow; hopefully it does not get in the way of your schedule with the other review, as I can see that one has not been completed... --K. Peake 18:41, 10 April 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead
✅
 * Infobox looks good!
 * "wrote the song with Adam Argyle while" → "co-wrote the song with Adam Argyle, while" because a comma is needed before while in British English for instances like this
 * I would recommend a comma either before through or as in the release sentence since it reads like a bit of a run-on currently
 * Pipe promotional single to Promotional recording
 * Pipe ballad to Sentimental ballad
 * Wikilink acoustic guitar
 * "using weed, alcohol" → "confessing to using weed, alcohol"
 * "Commercially, the song charted" → "Commercially, "Thinking 'Bout You" charted"
 * Include the respective positions on the charts
 * Mention that the song received the video in February 2017
 * "A remix by" → "A remix of the song by" to specify so it doesn't sound like you mean a live remix

Background and composition
✅
 * Audio sample text looks good, but you should wikilink acoustic guitar nevertheless!
 * There is no background info about how any of the collaborators became involved with Lipa; I would suggest mentioning that Koz contributed produced numerous tracks on the album
 * "and Adam Argyle with" → "and Adam Argyle, with" for correct separation of the roles to avoid confusion
 * Wikilink synthesizer
 * Pipe mixing to Audio mixing (recorded music)
 * Pipe mastering to Mastering (audio)
 * "was handled by" → "were both handled by"
 * ""Thinking 'Bout You" is an" → "Musically, "Thinking 'Bout You" is an"
 * Pipe ballad to Sentimental ballad
 * Swap the order of the Idolator and iTunes Store refs per the prose
 * "is composed in time" → "is composed in the time signature of  time"
 * Pipe groove to Groove (music)
 * Wikilink acoustic guitar
 * Wikilink bluesy
 * Pipe range to Vocal range
 * Wikilink lament
 * "evoking desperation in" → "while evoking desperation in"

Release and promotion
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 * Add the word "accounts" after SoundCloud and YouTube
 * [15] does not source the song as being among the ones performed by her at Eurosonic Noorderslag
 * Removed. LOVI  33  22:48, 11 April 2021 (UTC)
 * "she performed it on" → "she performed the song on"
 * Remove comma after independent record label
 * "It serves as the" → "It served as the"
 * Pipe promotional single to Promotional recording
 * "Room for 2" being the previous promo single is unsourced
 * Added in source. LOVI  33  22:48, 11 April 2021 (UTC)
 * You can split the music video into a third para of its own to separate from release/performances, as there is enough info
 * "in April of that year alongside" → "in April 2017 alongside one of"
 * "the setlists for the singer's Self-Titled Tour in 2017 and 2018." → "the setlist for the singer's Self-Titled Tour, which ran from 2017 to 2018."
 * Remove wikilink on New Zealand and mention that the performance was for Warner Music New Zealand

Reception
✅
 * "Lipa's versatility saying" → "Lipa's versatility, saying"
 * "that it shows her" → "that the song shows Lipa's"
 * Wikilink Tanqueray
 * "thought it is more of a" → "thought the song is of a more"
 * "but also it's clearest giving one" → "but also among its clearest due to giving one"
 * "opted that the song" → "opined that the song" because this is not a specific choice

Track listings

 * Good

Credits and personnel
✅
 * Wikilink Dua Lipa

Charts

 * Good

Release history

 * Good

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 10:09, 11 April 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review ! I have addressed all your comments. Let me know if anything else needs to be done. LOVI  33  22:53, 11 April 2021 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, great to wake up to your response here in the UK and everything is checked! --K. Peake 06:36, 12 April 2021 (UTC)