Talk:Third Onondaga County courthouse

Post-PR comments
Here are a few comments I meant to post at the PR but never did.
 * Periods should be removed from some of the captions per WP:CAPFRAG.
 * Lead, para 3: Despite proposals to repurpose the building in various ways, including in the book Architecture Worth Saving in Onondaga County - I would say "including one in the book", because otherwise "including in the book" refers grammatically to "in various ways" (i.e. it sounds like one of the ways the building is being repurposed is in the book).
 * Description, para 1: A tower was attached to the left side - Which direction did the building face?
 * Description, para 2: 52 by 72 feet (16 by 22 m) - This should be singular.
 * I noticed that some quotations, e.g. "asymmetrical massing and detached form," have the comma/period inside the quotation marks even if they are not full sentences. Per MOS:LQ, for these types of quotes, the punctuation should be outside the quotation marks.

More in a bit. – Epicgenius (talk) 16:03, 11 January 2024 (UTC)