Talk:Thirsty Beaver/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Chiswick Chap (talk · contribs) 13:48, 3 February 2024 (UTC)

I'll have a go at this one. Chiswick Chap (talk) 13:48, 3 February 2024 (UTC)

Comments

 * Ah, what a sad story. I do think the link to "holdout" in the lead should display that word, however. (Could be " held out against two offers".)
 * Completed this Bruxton (talk) 15:28, 3 February 2024 (UTC)


 * No need for "Holdout" in the See also list, by the way, as it's already in use, though you might want to link it once in the article body.
 * Completed this Bruxton (talk) 15:28, 3 February 2024 (UTC)


 * Not sure the 'Background' / 'History' split really works, as both sections describe the building's history. Most of the material would work in a 'History' section, with the last paragraphs ("The bar ... month.", and "In 2021, ... there.") of each of the two current sections in a 'Features' section.
 * I have rearranged the article Bruxton (talk) 15:40, 3 February 2024 (UTC)


 * I can't see the bras nailed to the entrances, presumably they're inside. Quite the feature.
 * Yes to get images I had to ask Flickr editors to change the license on their uploads - none of the interior yet.


 * The images run into the References, since the infobox takes up so much space. Might be as well to organize them in a gallery.
 * I have created a gallery


 * The "side view" is actually a corner or three-quarter view as it shows the front also.
 * I changed the caption to read "mage of the beaver mural"


 * Spotchecks are fine. I've marked [7] Sprinkle's link as dead, no worries as it's already archived.
 * Bruxton (talk) 15:40, 3 February 2024 (UTC)

Summary
Well, that's about it from me. All good, basically. Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:19, 3 February 2024 (UTC)