Talk:This Is the Day (Ivy song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 19:50, 8 May 2017 (UTC)


 * Grabbing this for a review if that is okay with you. Aoba47 (talk) 19:50, 8 May 2017 (UTC)


 * Comments from Aoba47
 * Please include the recording studios in the infobox.
 * Do we know the location (i.e. city) of the new recording studio Stratosphere? It may be helpful to add a small part about this.
 * I would include the years that Live a Little, Vol. 1 and Pepsi Pop Culture.
 * I would include the years for “The Best Thing” and “You Don’t Know Anything”.
 * I would suggest adding a topic sentence to the “Critical reception” section.
 * I am not sure if this would be helpful for this article or not, but in this source here, Durand talked a little bit about “This is the Day” in There’s Something about Mary. Just something to think about for the article.
 * Would “Sleeping Late” and “Sweet Mary” count as B-sides for the single?
 * I would suggest putting (Credits and personnel adapted from Apartment Life) at the top of the “Credits and personnel” section.
 * Make sure to have all of the work/producers part of the references linked (for instance, AllMusic needs to be linked in all of the instances).


 * Final comment
 * Great work with this article. I will pass this once my comments are addressed. Aoba47 (talk) 02:02, 9 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Thanks so much (and for finding that source!). Technically, it would be incorrect to label "Sleeping Late" and "Sweet Mary" as B-sides because they appear on the CD single and B-sides only occur on vinyl, although some artists nowadays tend to label unreleased/rare songs as B-sides and make a fortune when they release them lol. Anyway, thanks again. I will get to reviewing your article very soon. Gracias, Carbrera (talk) 02:29, 9 May 2017 (UTC).
 * Thank you for addressing my comments. And that makes sense to me, but I just wanted to confirm that with you. I will ✅ this; great work with this article, and I look forward to working with you further in the future. De nada. Aoba47 (talk) 15:47, 9 May 2017 (UTC)