Talk:Thomas Hall (mechanic)/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hawkeye7 (talk · contribs) 08:35, 3 August 2022 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it well written?
 * A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
 * Some minor issues (see below)
 * B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
 * See below
 * 1) Is it verifiable with no original research?
 * A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
 * All jumbled up, but the MOS does not require any particular order
 * B. All in-line citations are from reliable sources, including those for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons&mdash;science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines:
 * C. It contains no original research:
 * D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
 * B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
 * 1) Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Looks pretty good. A couple of very minor issues.
 * 1) Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Looks pretty good. A couple of very minor issues.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Looks pretty good. A couple of very minor issues.

Issues
Mostly to demonstrate that I did check it.
 * What are carpenders?
 * Should "self adjusting" be "self-adjusting"?
 * "Dr. H. S. Leskowitch " We normally leave out the "Dr." per MOS:HONORIFIC
 * Any idea what his daughters' names were?
 * ✅ No, looked everywhere. Only names able to find are the ones given in article.
 * No worries. Hawkeye7   (discuss)  11:38, 3 August 2022 (UTC)
 * Hawkeye7  (discuss)  08:35, 3 August 2022 (UTC):  All Issues have been addressed. Can you take another look. Thanks. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:05, 3 August 2022 (UTC)
 * Passed. Hawkeye7   (discuss)  11:41, 3 August 2022 (UTC)
 * No worries. Hawkeye7   (discuss)  11:38, 3 August 2022 (UTC)
 * Hawkeye7  (discuss)  08:35, 3 August 2022 (UTC):  All Issues have been addressed. Can you take another look. Thanks. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:05, 3 August 2022 (UTC)
 * Passed. Hawkeye7   (discuss)  11:41, 3 August 2022 (UTC)