Talk:Thomas Laycock (physiologist)

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Hi, I plan on adding more general information on Thomas Laycock and his contributions to medicine. Kennyling96 (talk) 03:13, 13 April 2017 (UTC)

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Hi Kenny. I thought that you did a good job discussing the key points of Laycock's life and career. I especially enjoyed the short anecdote about him having to have his knee amputated and thought it was interesting that Laycock used observation as his principal method of scientific inquiry. Also, I enjoyed reading about Laycock because his two major areas of study are related to both of my majors. Some small things you could fix is that "University College in London" should just be "University College London" with a hyperlink including all three of those words. Also, I noticed that you did not cite the last sentence of a lot of your paragraphs. I think that you could add more information about his teachings because they seem like interesting topics that could be expanded on even more. Overall, good job! Brendanjhong (talk) 21:59, 22 April 2017 (UTC)