Talk:Thorfinn the Mighty/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 15:18, 20 February 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges  Consermonor   Opus meum  15:18, 20 February 2018 (UTC)

Criteria
GA Criteria:
 * 1
 * 1.a ✅
 * 1.b ✅
 * 2
 * 2.a ✅
 * 2.b ✅
 * 2.c ✅
 * 2.d ✅ (0.0% is highest)
 * 3
 * 3.a ✅
 * 3.b ✅
 * 4
 * 4.a ✅
 * 5
 * 5.a ✅
 * 6
 * 6.a ✅
 * 6.b ✅
 * No DAB links ✅
 * No Dead links ✅
 * Images appropriately licensed ✅

Prose Suggestions

 * which were written down long after the time of the events in his life they record I suggest you change this to which created long after the events of his life they record.
 * We know roughly when the saga was first written down, but unfortunately we have no idea when the oral material it records was first created. Ben   Mac  Dui  11:07, 24 February 2018 (UTC)


 * On the last day of the feast Thorkel was supposed to travel with Einar for the reciprocal event but the former's spies reported that ambushes were in place en route. suggest On the last day of the feast Thorkel was supposed to travel with Einar for the reciprocal event, however his spies reported to him that ambushes had been prepared against him along his route.
 * Done.


 * ended with Karl defeated and fugitive or dead. suggest ended with Karl either being killed or forced to flee.
 * Done.


 * That is all my comments, passing now. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  18:06, 23 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Many thanks for the review & these comments. Ben   Mac  Dui  11:07, 24 February 2018 (UTC)