Talk:Thought broadcasting

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 25 October 2021 and 20 November 2021. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Jab0912. Peer reviewers: Rhong4.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 11:19, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Peer Review

 * Lead: Lead paragraph is concise and adequately describes the article's topic. Perhaps one sentence summarizing treatment can be included in the lead as well.
 * Content: Added content about the lawsuit is interesting due to its relevancy to the topic.
 * Tone and Balance: Added content is neutral. There is no apparent bias.
 * Sources and References: Some of the sources are a little dated. Perhaps more recent articles can be added.
 * Overall, the content is improved and easy to read. Good grammatical changes. Maybe some wiki links to OCPD, schizoaffective, bipolar, David Letterman can be included for completeness. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Rhong4 (talk • contribs) 17:29, 15 November 2021 (UTC)

Thank you for the ideas. I went ahead and added some treatment info to the lead and did another search to see how relevant some of the older sources still are. Will add some more hyperlinks as well since I agree that would be useful. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jab0912 (talk • contribs) 18:11, 18 November 2021 (UTC)

External links modified
Hello fellow Wikipedians,

I have just added archive links to 1 one external link on Thought broadcasting. Please take a moment to review my edit. If necessary, add after the link to keep me from modifying it. Alternatively, you can add to keep me off the page altogether. I made the following changes:
 * Added archive https://web.archive.org/20101228020846/http://www.movementdisorders.org/UserFiles/file/Long_SAPS_2000_publish(1).pdf to http://www.movementdisorders.org/UserFiles/file/Long_SAPS_2000_publish(1).pdf

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