Talk:Thousand Islands Parkway/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:48, 14 March 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's all I have here, it's on hold. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 12:44, 16 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I imagine a feasible redirect based on the lead is Highway 2S.
 * "St. Lawrence River Road" is in the infobox, is this another name for the parkway?
 * "divided highway" is that "dual carriageway" where I come from? Is there a link for us non-experts?
 * "use by cars between" just cars, or vehicles in general?
 * "Thousands Islands" just the one thousand.
 * "a bicycle trail and" in the lead and "A recreational trail follows" in the article...
 * "Darlingside, Rockport, Narrows..." etc. I think it's permissible to relink this outside the lead.
 * "and a left-hand exit provides"" overlinked.
 * " depression relief" financial or emotional?
 * Is "The Ontario Department of Highways" the same as/forerunner to Ministry of Transportation of Ontario?
 * ""a two lane gravel " hyphenate two-lane here.
 * " proper two lane undivided' similar. Also, similar to above, is an "undivided" road the same as a "single carriageway" where I'm from?
 * "persuade the DHO to construct" what's DHO?
 * "September 1, 1967 from" comma after year.
 * "0.62" probably good enough to go to 0.6 to keep decimal places consistent in this case.
 * "17 - Schedule" en-dash.
 * Is TVO TVOntario?
 * "Park - Getting " en-dash.
 * Several of these spaced hyphens in the ref titles.
 * Ref 27, use MOS:ELLIPSIS in the title.
 * Note [a] is not referenced.
 * "Thousand Islands Parkway - Length and Route" en-dash.


 * So The St. Lawrence River Road was the historic name. I've added it into the lead and created a redirect for it as well as Highway 2S. For ref 27, the ellipses are as they are in the title, which seems correct based on MOS:ELLIPSES. See . All other issues have been addressed (diff). -  Floydian  τ ¢ 15:25, 16 March 2021 (UTC)
 * So you have "10 Days... or Aug. 15... or... Well, 2-Lane Stretch on 401 Open Soon" and my reading of MOS:ELLIPSIS should make it "10 Days... or Aug. 15... or... Well, 2-Lane Stretch on 401 Open Soon", i.e. non-breaking spaces before each of the ellipses. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 15:59, 16 March 2021 (UTC)
 * The part that had me on the fence was whether that only applied to quotations. Somebody else's hill to die on though; change made. I've gone ahead and added alt text for the images as well FYI. -  Floydian  τ ¢ 18:33, 16 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Okay, cool. The MOS should apply to all aspects of the article really.  SO, I'm happy now and promoting. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 08:27, 17 March 2021 (UTC)