Talk:Three-phase Israel–Hamas war ceasefire proposal

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we can continue our conversation here. Feel free to edit the article.VR (Please ping on reply) 05:24, 12 May 2024 (UTC)


 * Consider WP:DYK. Makeandtoss (talk) 08:02, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Done, please see Template:Did you know nominations/Ceasefire proposal for Israel–Hamas war (May 5). VR (Please ping on reply) 03:57, 18 May 2024 (UTC)

add the 3 disagreed points of the proposal
right after the sentence:

"Hamas said it disagreed with three points in that proposal"

add: "the 3 points that they disagreed in that proposal:
 * a permanent ceasefire
 * withdrawal of what the source called “occupation forces” – that is, Israeli troops – from the Gaza Strip
 * the return of displaced people from the south to the north."

the citation could be from the same cnn article https://edition.cnn.com/2024/03/03/middleeast/isreal-delegation-cairo-gaza-hostages-intl/index.html 79.180.47.77 (talk) 14:20, 19 May 2024 (UTC)

clarification regarding the living Israeli hostage
in the wikipedia article is regarding the 1st stage of the deal

"In this stage, Hamas would release 33 Israeli captives. It would start with releasing all living Israeli children (under 19), all living civilian women, all living elderly (over age 50) Israelis, and all living female Israeli soldiers"

but in the aljazeera article its written:

"During the first phase, Hamas shall release 33 Israeli captives (alive or dead), including women (civilians and soldiers), children (under the age of 19 who are not soldiers), those over the age of 50, and the sick, in exchange for a number of prisoners in Israeli prisons and detention centres, according to the following [criteria]:

.....

If there are fewer than 33 living Israeli detainees to be released, a number of bodies from the same categories shall be released to complete this stage. In return, Israel will release all women and children who were arrested from the Gaza Strip after October 7, 2023 – provided this is done in the fifth week of this stage."

can we address possibility of fewer then 33 hostages alive in the summery of the first step of the deal? 79.180.47.77 (talk) 14:34, 19 May 2024 (UTC)

To be added: Egyptian intelligence may have changed term
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Thoughts? FortunateSons (talk) 06:12, 22 May 2024 (UTC)
 * And now they are saying the same thing about Joe Biden. I think Egyptian response to the allegations against it is quite apt: "Some parties play a game of accusing the mediators, blaming and accusing them of bias in order to evade making the required decisions." VR (Please ping on reply) 16:20, 3 June 2024 (UTC)

AfD?
I'm not sure that every proposal that anyone suggests during a long process of negotiations deserves a wikipedia article Vegan416 (talk) 13:53, 29 May 2024 (UTC)


 * Its worth noting that Joe Biden just announced a proposal that reliable sources are saying is almost "identical" to the ceasefire proposal this article is about:
 * On May 6, Hamas said it had agreed to a ceasefire proposal by Egypt and Qatar that appears to be almost identical to the one Biden announced on Friday. Israeli leaders rejected that initiative. Al-Jazeera
 * "This deal to stop the war is nearly identical to Hamas, its own proposals, of only a few weeks ago" Washington Post quotes a Biden administration official.
 * "The proposal Biden outlined in great detail appeared nearly identical to the one Hamas agreed to in early May. The main exception appeared to be no reference to the complete lifting of Israel's blockade of the Gaza Strip." Middle East Eye
 * almost identical" to the proposal this article is about.VR (Please ping on reply) 02:37, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
 * "almost identical" is not identical. Vegan416 (talk) 17:46, 1 June 2024 (UTC)

Article replacement
This edit completely replaces the article by deleting almost everything that was there previously, and replacing it with an entirely different article. I understand the topics are strongly connected. And I wouldn't have objected if the edit merely added the material without removing the previous material. Hence I will undo this edit. I will also undo the undiscussed move. Please start a move request.VR (Please ping on reply) 14:44, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
 * by the time I found the "In use" template there had been no edits for nearly 15 hours. Once you're done with edits, please remove the in use template.VR (Please ping on reply) 14:52, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Great, I can clear this article off my "to write" list. Feel free to do the work yourself. elijahpepe@wikipedia (he/him) 15:05, 3 June 2024 (UTC)

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 3 June 2024
This page currently identifies Greg Casar as a US senator. It should be updated to reflect that he is actually a member of the House of Representatives. Arcturus95 (talk) 17:11, 3 June 2024 (UTC)

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 3 June 2024 (2)
Should Details of the March 5 proposal and Reactions to March 5 proposal both be May 5?

There does not seem to be any mention of March anywhere else, so this seems like a typo to me. Arcturus95 (talk) 17:21, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
 * ✅   [[User:CanonNi ]]  (talk • contribs) 01:12, 4 June 2024 (UTC)

Fix redundance
It’s redundant to say “female soldiers” after you already said “women” in “the total number of alive children, women, elderly and female soldiers”. 82.36.70.81 (talk) 23:20, 7 June 2024 (UTC)

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 13 June 2024
I request that we change "all Israeli being held in Gaza" to "all *Israelis* being held in Gaza." As in, change the singular to a plural. Zoozoor (talk) 13:57, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * ✅ Jamedeus (talk) 20:16, 13 June 2024 (UTC)