Talk:Three Horses Beer/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Coemgenus (talk · contribs) 11:51, 1 July 2015 (UTC)

Checklist

 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Comments
I'll get started on this one today. --Coemgenus (talk) 11:51, 1 July 2015 (UTC)

This is a well-written article, not much to quibble with.


 * Lede
 * "Star Breweries also produces THB Fresh, a shandy (locally called panaché), with less than 1% alcohol, THB Special (6.2% alcohol), and THB Lite, a low alcohol beer (1%)." This sentence has some confusing commas. I'd suggest using semi-colons or more parentheses.
 * Rephrased. - Lemurbaby (talk) 06:04, 2 July 2015 (UTC)


 * Production
 * "...a type of mushroom is added..." That's an interesting detail. Do you know which kind of mushroom?
 * Unfortunately, the source material doesn't specify. I'd like to know too! - Lemurbaby (talk) 06:04, 2 July 2015 (UTC)
 * That's too bad. It will have to remain a mystery! --Coemgenus (talk) 12:25, 2 July 2015 (UTC)


 * Images
 * File:THB.JPG concerns me. The license says it's the uploader's own work, but it looks a lot like the company's advertising. Do you know any more about it?
 * Agreed, I'm doubtful it's original work. I've replaced the image. - Lemurbaby (talk) 06:04, 2 July 2015 (UTC)
 * New one looks fine. --Coemgenus (talk) 12:25, 2 July 2015 (UTC)


 * References
 * Footnotes 20 and 22 are deadlinks.
 * Yes, it doesn't appear there are any active versions of these pages anymore, though they're available cached. Otherwise I would provide updated links. - Lemurbaby (talk) 06:04, 2 July 2015 (UTC)
 * The best thing to do in that case is to change the "url=" field to "archive-url=" and replaced the dead link with the address for the archived version. --Coemgenus (talk) 12:28, 2 July 2015 (UTC)
 * OK, I just added them for you. Passed! --Coemgenus (talk) 13:43, 4 July 2015 (UTC)