Talk:Thunder (Leona Lewis song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Azealia911 (talk · contribs) 17:34, 17 October 2015 (UTC)

I'll get to this before the weekend is over  Azealia 911   talk  17:34, 17 October 2015 (UTC)

General

 * Lewis's is grammatically incorrect in terms of names, Lewis' is the correct presentation.

Lead and infobox

 * No need for the dash in "top-thirty"
 * Cover needs an alt.
 * Nothing on the songs genre you could find?
 * No, unfortunately. I was really surprised at just how few reviews there are. — Calvin999  13:08, 20 October 2015 (UTC)

Production and release

 * Perhaps rename this section 'Background'
 * "(on behalf of itself and Gadfly Songs (ASCAP)" needs an extra closing bracket.

Composition

 * "Vibe described "Thunder"" → "Vibe described the track"
 * "longer/ When" → "longer / When"
 * "appeared to be directed her former label boss" makes no sense.

Critical reception and commercial response

 * A rather long-winded title, I'd suggest a simple "Reception" and then dividing the section into two paragraphs, one for critical reception and the other for commercial performance, using level-3 headers is your choice.
 * I've renamed it but I'm not making it into two sub-sections, they would be far too short and it's not necessary. — Calvin999  13:10, 20 October 2015 (UTC)
 * "are some of" → "were some of"
 * album's → albums

Promotion

 * "On 13 August, Lewis" → "On 13 August, she"
 * No need for the dash in "mini-set"
 * "The started with" makes no sense.
 * ""Bleeding Love" followed" needs a comma after Love"
 * "to the beginning of there performed in the style" makes no sense.

Formats

 * This seems like an odd section title. Formats would mean that the song was released to various platforms, EG a CD single, iTunes single, radio airplay version. However they're all of the same format, perhaps "Versions" would be a better title? Or maybe you can think of a more suitable word yourself.
 * I'd replace the # with *, putting them in a numbered list gives off the impression they all originate on a remixes EP.
 * Remix shouldn't be capitalized.

Charts

 * Columns should probably be sortable given there's five positions.
 * Czech Republic and Slovakia also have templates, see this as an example.
 * They were originally but they didn't work properly so I changed them. Nothing wrong with manually inputting anyway. — Calvin999  13:15, 20 October 2015 (UTC)

Release history

 * Ref. →
 * Remix shouldn't be capitalized.
 * Nothing on the release of the song elsewhere, EG her home country?
 * It was a US only single, as noted in the lead and background ;-) — Calvin999  13:17, 20 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Either unlink digital download, or link Adult contemporary.
 * The Tom Swoon remix was released on September 25th, not the 11th.
 * The Tom Swoon remix was released on September 25th, not the 11th.