Talk:Thunder Oak

Tada! Zeki has landed. Will be reworking the article as I read the books. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Zekiw (talk • contribs) 05:02, 27 January 2009 (UTC)

For whatever absurd reason I've been rewriting the plot summary from the end upwards. I'll try to finish the first half soon. Then we can have it assessed for start-class. Any other important sections to be added? Zekiw (talk) 21:14, 24 February 2009 (UTC)

Assessment
As requested on WikiProject Children's Literature, I have read this article through for assessment and upgraded it to Start class. To improve, I suggest you:
 * Find and add to the article several reliable sources (one is not enough).
 * Include in-line citations wherever neccessary.
 * Add sections to cover non-plot aspects of the book in more detail - for example, its conception, and critical response.
 * Explain any terms which may confuse users who have not read the series - make the article more accessible.
 * Extend the lead section to summarise the entire article.
 * Shorten the overly long Plot section.
 * Try to avoid in-universe perspective.

If you have any comments or questions about this assessment, please leave them on my talk page. strdst_grl  (call me Stardust)  14:50, 19 April 2009 (UTC)