Talk:Tibbers Castle/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 06:05, 24 September 2016 (UTC)

Well constructed, will get back shortly. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 06:05, 24 September 2016 (UTC)

Section 1

 * Para 1; sentence 2; Use past tense of the word "record" i.e "recorded". Comma after Sir Richard Siward must be removed. Because it completely disrupts the sentence meaning.
 * Para 1; last sentence; Add a comma after "In 1302".
 * Para 2; In the sentence "...rs to George Crichton, Lord High Admiral of Scotland and later 1st ....". Add "to the" after "later".


 * Para 2: Capitalize "i" at the start of second sentence.

Section 2
No issues in this section.

Lead
In last sentence change the tense to "took place" instead of "have taken", because the years of happening were mentioned.

Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 09:13, 24 September 2016 (UTC)


 * All good suggestions, done so far. Richard Nevell (talk) 11:28, 25 September 2016 (UTC)
 * I've done a couple of edits. Good to go.
 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 12:21, 25 September 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:


 * Thank you for reviewing the article! Richard Nevell (talk) 12:28, 25 September 2016 (UTC)