Talk:Til It Happens to You/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: FrB.TG (talk · contribs) 13:04, 29 February 2016 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * I don't think you need to wiki-link documentary as it's a common term.
 * "After writing the song, Warren asked Gaga to record 'Til It Happens to You'" - Gaga also wrote the song, didn't she?
 * Background and release
 * "Warren was moved by the idea saying: "I cannot not [sic] write a song for you" - replace not [sic] with ...
 * Chart performance
 * Please add the position of the song on the Ultratip charts.
 * Accolades
 * I see seven instances of nominations. Try to reduce.
 * Live performances
 * "She sang it while sitting in front of a white piano" - normally a piano is white so I don't think you need the color.
 * References
 * Remove the link for MTV News in ref 6.
 * Ref 15 and 17 - Link Fuse in the former and de-link it in the latter. Also, is it supposed to be in italics or ..?
 * Remove Alfred Publishing from ref 19 for the sake of consistency.
 * Ref 45- remove the link for THP.
 * Ref 48, 49 - ditto.
 * Ref 65 - wiki-link Los Angeles Times.
 * For the Daily Mail source, see Potentially unreliable sources. --  Frankie talk 16:43, 4 March 2016 (UTC)
 * Hi,, I have addressed all the comments, except the one with the piano. I believe the piano article exemplifies this, that pianos are mostly made of wood so its either brown or black in color. I would also add that white pianos were actually signature of Elvis and his music and not used that much. — I B  [ Poke  ] 08:50, 5 March 2016 (UTC)