Talk:Tilbury Fort/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 15:15, 4 June 2016 (UTC)

Great, I would love to review one of your masterpieces. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 15:15, 4 June 2016 (UTC)

Fairly well-written as always, so these are mere nitpicks :) Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 18:37, 4 June 2016 (UTC)


 * Most changes made, comments left on the others. Thanks for the review! Hchc2009 (talk) 20:07, 9 June 2016 (UTC)


 * 16th century
 * his wife, Catherine of Aragon Comma after "Aragon"
 * Done. Hchc2009 (talk) 20:07, 9 June 2016 (UTC)


 * You may consider converting tons, though it is not mandatory.
 * Done. Hchc2009 (talk) 20:07, 9 June 2016 (UTC)


 * James Nedeham and Christopher Morice Better add their professions to introduce them
 * I struggled to think of a good profession to ascribe to them... Hchc2009 (talk) 20:07, 9 June 2016 (UTC)


 * "Rampart" is linked twice
 * Done. Hchc2009 (talk) 20:07, 9 June 2016 (UTC)


 * 17th century
 *  sixty-six men in 1651 "66" would appear less wordy and better per WP:MOSNUM
 * There's a comparison with the "three" earlier in the line though, so I think this is the preferred MOSNUM format. Hchc2009 (talk) 20:07, 9 June 2016 (UTC)


 * 18th–19th centuries
 * I wonder if links are needed for "rainwater" and "cricket"
 * Cricket removed. Hchc2009 (talk) 20:07, 9 June 2016 (UTC)


 * 20th–21st centuries
 * I don't think a hyphen is needed in "down-stream"
 * Done. Hchc2009 (talk) 20:07, 9 June 2016 (UTC)


 * Architecture
 * under the direction of Sir Bernard de Gomme You can call him "de Gnomme" everywhere once you have introduced him
 * This is a new section, though, so he needs to be reintroduced. Hchc2009 (talk) 20:07, 9 June 2016 (UTC)

That should be it. Cheers, Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 18:37, 4 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Please respond. Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 06:22, 9 June 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for the changes. I am happy to promote this. Cheers, Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 10:41, 10 June 2016 (UTC)