Talk:Till the World Ends/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ashliveslove (talk · contribs) 11:33, 8 November 2011 (UTC)

Started reviewing the article. ASHUIND  11:33, 8 November 2011 (UTC)


 * Review
 * No disambiguation links found till date.
 * Layout, grammar and everything else checks out fine.
 * Have decided to put on hold until reply from nominator for following problems.


 * Problems
 * Citation problem found. Please correct it.
 * Again there is one citation problem left, maybe left in a recent edit. Check reference no. 59.
 * What's the problem with the link? It works fine and the reference is well-formatted.
 * Saw edit wars in log between SmoLu and Xwomanizerx between July 21 - July 26. Was this resolved?
 * Yes, that was four months ago...
 * Ohk. Just wanted to make sure that other reviewers don't object over the same reason.
 * Found dead links. Have tagged them in article. Please remove or correct them.
 * Removed both.
 * Removed both.

Xwomanizerx (talk) 01:47, 9 November 2011 (UTC)


 * Comment
 * I think images of Keaha and Nicki are unnecessary in Remix section of the article. A inter-wiki link to their article is sufficient. It lessens the view of article to a great deal and many people are familiar with both the artists. ASHUIND  20:23, 11 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Pictures are most welcome for identification as long as they are free. A song article can have a picture of a rose in the Composition section of the lyrics mention about a rose. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 13:04, 12 November 2011 (UTC)
 * I suggest the picture is moved to the right. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 13:07, 12 November 2011 (UTC)
 * That quote above that picture box should be in a quotebox. Will make it highlighted from the general writing standards. ASHUIND  06:33, 13 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Wait, who told you that? Why should it be in a quote box? We recommend usage of a blockquote. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 06:58, 13 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Ahh, sry about that. Was not remembering the correct word 'blockquote'. By-the-way is anyone improving the article or are we just uselessly commenting back? ASHUIND  12:07, 13 November 2011 (UTC)
 * It's okay. Try to talk to him. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 12:42, 13 November 2011 (UTC)
 * So, is that it? Xwomanizerx (talk) 15:52, 15 November 2011 (UTC)

Final Analysis

 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * Yes. ASHUIND  10:16, 16 November 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * No such concerns here. Article has been searched thoroughly for such references Some problems were found and resolved. ASHU</b><sup style="color:red;">IND  10:16, 16 November 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * All such aspects have been covered. <b style="color:orange;">ASHU</b><sup style="color:red;">IND  10:16, 16 November 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * Fine here. Well balanced. <b style="color:orange;">ASHU</b><sup style="color:red;">IND  10:16, 16 November 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * Issues were there but was resolved. <b style="color:orange;">ASHU</b><sup style="color:red;">IND  10:16, 16 November 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * All images are proper till the review date and well captioned. <b style="color:orange;">ASHU</b><sup style="color:red;">IND  10:16, 16 November 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * All images are proper till the review date and well captioned. <b style="color:orange;">ASHU</b><sup style="color:red;">IND  10:16, 16 November 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Keep up the good quality of Article. Don't let it delisted. Regards. <b style="color:orange;">ASHU</b><sup style="color:red;">IND  10:16, 16 November 2011 (UTC)