Talk:Tim Bozon/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Khazar2 (talk · contribs) 21:38, 19 May 2013 (UTC)

I'll be glad to take this review--sorry you've had to wait so long for one. Initial comments to follow in the next 1-3 days. Thanks in advance for your work on this one! -- Khazar2 (talk) 21:38, 19 May 2013 (UTC)

Initial comments
On first pass, this looks like solid work: well-written, well-sourced, and ripe for promotion. Thanks again for your work on it. I made a few tweaks as I went; feel free to double-check me and revert anything with which you disagree.

Two minor clarity points:
 * " His goal total was the most among all WHL rookies" -- that year or all time?
 * "his points second and third overall on the Blazers" -- I'm not quite sure I understand how he took both second and third in points--is this second in goals, third in assists?

Checklist

 * Sorry for the delay. I went ahead and fixed up everything here. Any questions of comments just let me know. Kaiser matias (talk) 18:20, 26 May 2013 (UTC)