Talk:Tim Breslin/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Khazar2 (talk · contribs) 12:28, 18 April 2013 (UTC)

I'll be glad to take this review; sorry you've had to wait so long for a reviewer. Initial comments to follow in the next 1-3 days. Thanks in advance for your work on this one! -- Khazar2 (talk) 12:28, 18 April 2013 (UTC)

Checklist
An initial pass shows no immediate issues. I did make some tweaks as I went for grammar and style; please double-check that I haven't inadvertently introduced any error, and feel free to revert anything you disagree with. Starting checklist below.