Talk:TimeClock Plus

Suggestions for improvement
Some quick thoughts on how the article can be improved. —S MALL JIM   16:11, 18 November 2011 (UTC)
 * It needs a proper lead section (important, but probably should be written last)
 * It has too many graphics (including the features table) that break up the flow of the text
 * All those quotes should be converted to narrative text
 * The sections should be more logical: perhaps History, Features, Reception
 * History could contain the content in the present History and Versions
 * Features could include the present Applications and much of Reception
 * Reception could include details of where it's used and any independent reviews etc (if they can be found)
 * Update: I've done the above. —S MALL  JIM   16:50, 25 November 2011 (UTC)