Talk:Time (K. Michelle song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 15:21, 28 January 2018 (UTC)

Lead

 * The song was released → replace "The song" with "It" to avoid repetition
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 23:04, 2 February 2018 (UTC)


 * produced "Time", and wrote it alongside → no comma
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 23:04, 2 February 2018 (UTC)


 * Critical response to "Time" was positive; critics praised the song's lyrics and the singer's vocals, and identified it as a highlight from the album → Critical response to "Time" was positive, with reviewers praising the song's lyrics and the singer's vocals, as well as identifying "Time" as a highlight on More Issues Than Vogue
 * The "with" sentence construction is actually discouraged on here (as I have found out during FACs). Aoba47 (talk) 23:04, 2 February 2018 (UTC)

Infobox

 * produced "Time", and wrote → remove comma
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 23:06, 2 February 2018 (UTC)


 * as a promotional single from Michelle's → I would say
 * I do no think that your suggestion is complete here. Aoba47 (talk) 23:06, 2 February 2018 (UTC)


 * (2016).[2][3][4] The single was available upon pre-ordering the album → (2016),[2][3][4] upon pre-ordering the record
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 23:06, 2 February 2018 (UTC)


 * through videos uploaded on her official Instagram account; in the black-and-white clips, she performs → through black-and-white videos uploaded on her official Instagram account, where she performed
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 23:06, 2 February 2018 (UTC)


 * March 7, 2016, she performed the song → say "sang the song" to avoid repetition
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 23:06, 2 February 2018 (UTC)

Composition and lyrics

 * four minutes and 37-seconds → four minutes and 37 seconds
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 23:09, 2 February 2018 (UTC)


 * The instrumental also includes "soulful melodies over climactic piano keys".[8] Along with strings and a piano, the single features drums in its composition.[4] → The instrumental also includes "soulful melodies over climactic piano keys" along with strings, a piano and drums.[4][8]
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 23:09, 2 February 2018 (UTC)


 * and Ken Hamm of SoulBounce.com referenced it → and Ken Hamm of SoulBounce.com referred to it as an
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 23:09, 2 February 2018 (UTC)


 * the singer directs its message to an ex-partner and tells them that it is too → the singer adresses an ex-partner whom she tells that it is too
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 23:09, 2 February 2018 (UTC)


 * associated "Time" as part of how Michelle → associated "Time" with how Michelle
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 23:09, 2 February 2018 (UTC)

Critical reception

 * Could find no significant mistakes here
 * Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 23:09, 2 February 2018 (UTC)

Credits and personnel

 * The following credits were adapted from → Credits adapted from
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 23:09, 2 February 2018 (UTC)

Release history

 * Flawless ;)
 * Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 23:10, 2 February 2018 (UTC)

Copy-violation

 * 35.9% is still acceptable!
 * Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 23:11, 2 February 2018 (UTC)

Outcome

 * Another great article. for 7 days. I'm looking forward to re-reviewing "Trainwreck"... Best regards, Cartoon network freak (talk) 21:53, 2 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the review. I believe that I have addressed everything. Aoba47 (talk) 23:11, 2 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Gladly passing this! Best regards, Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:16, 3 February 2018 (UTC)